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Seem to have accidentally started a Panorama UK campaign HELP !!!!!

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Time for your bit....

Have completely redrafted the letter, changed the style etc. Asking lots of questions with info in between.

Come on then peeps what dya think?? Honest, frank replies from all please!!

Would you be happy for this to be widely circulated and for it to be the basis of a campaign? Think it needs any major/minor changes or improvments? Also, notice any niggly little typos etc... bound to be some especially in the reference section or things I should have referenced better but havn't yet. Looked at it too much myself needs fresh eyes....

Thanks very much for you input, in advance! :D

Jan xx

*Edit Ok really wish I hadn't started this will thread with such a panic stricken sounding title now I've got my thoughts together!! :ashamed:
oh dear lol! doesn't exactly generate confidence! :tear:
 
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Just to say rather than repost the letter with few corrections -just been back and corrected last posting on it.
We're really getting it together now. Will prob stop posting here &just post a link in advocacy section when projects in full flow.

Having said that, any input at this stage still very welcome!

Jan xx