I've drafted this petition to Francis Collins, Walter Koroshetz, and the NIH. Let me know your thoughts...
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@Jesse2233, thank you for your time and effort! I realize this is just a draft, as you said. My thoughts are that a petition would have to be worded really carefully and exact (especially since ME patients are already accused of pressuring institutions into decisions, being unreasonable and only accepting research they "like"). I've worked for NGOs and with petitions in my old life and it's tempting to put petitions out there quickly, because it's so easy, but a convincing thought through petition really pays off in the end.
and he was listed in The Atlantic as one of the greatest innovators currently working.
It was inventor (not innovator).
Quick thoughts are to not give the personal motivation (his son) too much room. And to focus more on the quality of his proposal and his extraordinarily collaborators than the severity of ME or his prior achievements (that are well known). And how he manages to bring top researchers together and is willing to collaborate and share and how he makes more and more highly qualified people interested to study ME/CFS. The "hero" is a little too emotional in my view. I think it's worth to focus on the advantages of Ron David's research. E.g. Ron stated somewhere that his approach to test everything will save time and money in the end, because whatever researchers plan to look at closer in ME patients in the future, they will have already test results they can use - stuff like that might give solid reasons.
Just some superquick thoughts. Can't propose phrases with my English skills, so can't give more constructive criticism, sorry

. Maybe you could ask the OMF about the petition and if they like the idea write it together with e.g. Linda?
Thanks again!