Andrew - You've already caught so much! This is just tweaking - I (and lots of others obviously) are really glad you've looked into this. It should be good/helpful for the Gulf War vets as well. If I find possible quotes regarding primary sources, I'll share them. Seems that this would be part of a research ethics class or even an academic writing course. At some point in my life, I've had "primary source" drilled into my head, but I don't even know now how I know that.